Pointless conversations,
Feelings left unconveyed,
Hidden amidst, abbreviations
And overemphasized exclamations.
843 emoticons under her tips,
But none describe,
The emotions suppressed,
Behind her lips,
The pings and the chirps,
No more excite her,
As the lines of diversity
And originality blur.
Tired of the false smiles,
And the fake condolences,
Tired of hyped up dramas,
Over misunderstood nuances.
All she wanted was a listener,
To hear her heart’s anxieties,
But all she got were benchers,
Passing their judgemental fancies.
Curiosity kills the cat,
They always said,
Her teenage inquisitiveness,
Is pulling her now, into this vortex.
Busy following the latest trends,
Sucked into the world of pretense,
She wanted to stop and
Look back at herself.
What had she done,
What was she doing,
Moving around in circles,
Unable to fulfill her destiny.
Trapped,
In this so called sanctuary,
#saveme is all what,
She manages to scream.
©Darshana Mehta
Amazingly amazing…. Keep it up.
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Thank you Chachu 😊
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“243 emoticons under her tips but none described”
Best lines from the poem
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Oops * 843 emoticons
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Hehe….that’s ok 😂
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Thank you so much Shaifali 😊
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Darshana child I loved it.
Fake smile n endless sympathies more customary than heartfelt these days.
Keep writing
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Thank you for all the encouragement, Auntie 😊😊
It is what helps me to write more 😇
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Wow, speechless 😶…..
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Thank you!😊😊
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Hashtags, emoticons, pings….. This is a very evocative poem because you have described so well the emptiness of the ‘virtual’ world and the ‘virtual’ friends. The silent scream in the #
Thank you for this good writing.
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Thank you so much Anne 😊
Yes the emptiness of the virtual world is oppressive but addictive.
You know you are being pulled in and yet all you can do is indulge in it even more.
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A very deep eye opener Darshana!! You have beautifully captured the dominance of technology over our human essence!! Amazing buddy!!!
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Thank you Farhan! 😊
It is always good to hear your thoughts, pal.
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Different think
Extreme level of thought
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Thank you 😇😇
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